ext_373299 ([identity profile] hellzabeth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hellzabeth 2011-02-25 01:07 pm (UTC)

Being a scaredy-cat and still reading something like this? Well done. XD Ahh, that's exactly it, if he weren't completely mad, Alfred would probably be a very nice, friendly person by nature. The fact it's there, lurking beneath the surface... that's scary.

He just got his neck snapped, so who knows how this'll end...

In canon? Not scary at all. XD In this universe, though, everyone has potential to be frightening.

Love-hate relationship with my cliffhangers, oh my. It kind of compliments each other, don't you think? Francis is scared of how Alfred's insane, and Alfred is scared of what Francis is full stop. And yet both have motives to be either friends or enemies. It had the potential to go either way, but of course, ended up with the enemies option.

Hahaha, yes, sadly it will end, but I hope to write a sequel at some point as well as side stories. And yeah, I'll finish MM before going back to polish off FT. Hahaha, this chapter took what, a week and a half? That's seriously slow for me.

Maybe I could do a mock up cover of a newspaper, showing Alfred's capture. XD (oh my lord so many tables will be flipped. And you know what else? He'll blame Francis for calling the police, not Alfred for being a psycho. orz;;;)

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